PLD – Chapter 3 –
Collaborating/Managing Projects
It was interesting to read about the “creative
conversational process”, especially in light of our conversations last night in
discursive psychology. In class last
night, and as I read today I was thinking that being truly (there is that word…)
collaborative is possible – when participants share the same agenda (or, at
least that has been my experience). I
was thinking about how a Reading Recovery colleague and I might use Skype next
year in the way you describe. I could
have it up and on and she could pipe in whenever she needed to, or I could
contact her. She will be working out of
Atlanta and I will be here (and sometimes vice versa) and we will be juggling
several projects in the region. We will
need to speak face to face sometimes, and Skype would be a good option. When I read Case Study 3.1, I thought about
how I might set up a blog like this when I do my dissertation – either with a
group of Reading Recovery teacher leaders (who would be the focus of my
dissertation) or with the Reading Recovery teacher (if I decide to look at
teacher/student interactions only).
Kilbourn – The
Dissertation Proposal
Thank you for this article.
I remember reading it last semester in Advanced Qual, but reading it
again was really valuable…as every day that passes I am one day closer to
needing to write such a proposal. I
think that this article, and several of the proposals you have provided us with
from DP will be great models when the time comes to write mine.
I thought Kilbourn did a nice job of articulating how
important it is that the proposal make a case for (an argument for) conducting
the research. He begins by offering
this clear cut definition of a proposal, “A proposal, then, is a piece of
writing that outlines the problem to be addressed, sets the boundaries for the
sorts of claims that will be made, and articulates the methods by which those
claims will be supported by evidence and argument. It is a piece of writing that sets in motion
a process that customarily culminates in the oral defense of the dissertation”.
Kilbourn spends some time reflecting on Toulmin’s work on
argument. Toulmin sees the theoretical
framework as a “point of view that legitimizes the manner in which the
interpretations are justified or warranted”.
The frame of the argument is as follows: 1) There is a formal argument
pattern, 2) arguments are incredibly complex and layered, 3) Warrants aren’t
explicit until interpretations are challenged. I like that Kilbourn differentiates the goals
of the argument in a proposal and in a dissertation. In a proposal, the author is constructing an
argument for even doing the research. In
the dissertation the argument is constructed to support the interpretations of
the study.
I thought it was interesting that in several places Kilbourn
gives the reader model language structures to use in the proposal. Page 538 is a good example (“The problem this
study will address is”…) where Kilbourn gives the language and a stern bit of
advice to readers…he stresses the necessity of the clarity of the problem
statement. He offers more language on
pages 561 and 562 (“Consequently, in light of the argument just made, our
understanding of so and so has been
inadequately researched. In this
proposed study I will address the problem by”….). He really does lay out a nice structure,
provides the rationale for the structure and gives some language prompts to
support the reader as they become the writer of a proposal.
On page 553, Kilbourn refers to Erickson (1986) when
offering questions that field work is best at answering. I was thinking of these questions as related
to the studies I am considering (Reading Recovery teacher leaders in training
or the interactions between a child and a Reading Recovery teacher) and also
through the lens of discursive psychology.
All 3 areas focus on the social action between participants.
The Appendix – Qualities of a Proposal – was also
useful. This is the most comprehensive
document on proposal writing I have seen.
I took a class – 640 in TPTE that was supposed to help give new entrants
a solid understanding of the process and
the various aspects of the process (comps, proposal, dissertation etc). It was a good overview, but could have been
enhanced by reading and discussion of an article like this! Thanks, again!
*At the close of class, you asked us to connect the readings
for Thursday to discussions last night.
I will get those readings done and will post again before class. I have been writing about my readings due
Tuesday and reflecting on class Tuesday night in my Wednesday night post and
focusing my Friday post on the Thursday readings and Thursday class.
Skill builder update:
Going paperless – I have made a commitment to read and
annotate all of my readings for this class on my ipad with IAnnotate. So far, so good. I like the portability of this option. I just need to remember to throw my ipad in
my bag and to have it charged at all times.
I like having access to all the readings and all my notes. There are so many times when I am thinking
about something and want to reread or refresh my memory. It is nice to have things readily available
for reference. I was worried about my
comprehension being affected by switching to digital format. One thing that I have notices is that I tend
to zone out a little more. I catch
myself coming to the end of a paragraph and thinking…”what did I just read?”
and I have to go back and give it another go.
I think the ease of the scrolling and my internet habit of surfing has
come into my reading. I just need to be
aware of it, and adjust. I think over
time I will zone out and need to reread less.
*I noticed through our small group conversations that my comprehension
of the readings WAS impacted. When you
mentioned the four different sections of the chapter, I drew a blank. I read every word of the chapter but couldn’t
call up the four major sections before you named them. I need to be even more aware of how this new
approach is impacting what I understand about what I read.
On IAnnotate, I like the highlight and note features. I also like how it is displayed all together
in the left hand margin when I go to review them. When I do my reading blog posts, I just pull
up that column, review my highlights or notes, and then write in response. This is really similar to what I do when I
handwrite and scribble in the margins and then write a response (still paper
for DP so I can compare the processes).
One benefit to the digital version is that I can actually decipher my
scribbles – sometimes when I hand write I can’t make heads or tails of what I
wanted to say. One interesting
difference so far is the nature of the notes.
I think I write more content and ideas and elaborate more when I hand
write. When make digital notes, so far,
they have tended to be shorter and more directive. I think that being aware of this will help me
change it.
I met with Ann Monday before our DP class. She helped me with a couple of aspects of
Mendeley that were difficult for me. I
couldn’t figure out how to get articles saved directly from a search (from
Google Scholar or Academic Search Premier) into my Mendeley account. We loaded the web importer on both of my main
search engines – Google Chrome and Internet Explorer, and now it is working
really well. Ann also showed me how to
be working in a word document and “insert citation” from the reference tab (we
had to add that feature) and also how to insert a bibliography. This is amazing and will save me so much time
when I write! Very, very nice. The sync
feature is also great. I have Mendeley
on my laptop, and on my ipad and I have a web account. In an instant, all the articles are in every
place. So cool.
I appreciate the opportunity to investigate these
tools. These assignments are perfect for
me – as someone who isn’t always comfortable with technology and needs support
to get under way with them.
Class Reflections:
Thank you for the email about Dr. Anfara, and also for
giving some time to class to offer their thoughts.
"In a proposal, the author is constructing an argument for even doing the research. In the dissertation the argument is constructed to support the interpretations of the study." - yes, they are serving quite different purposes. Sometimes it seems hard for students to understand what the purpose of these milestones are, and that's one reason I like Kilbourn article a lot.
ReplyDelete"I just need to remember to throw my ipad in my bag and to have it charged at all times." Yes, ditto.
"I noticed through our small group conversations that my comprehension of the readings WAS impacted. When you mentioned the four different sections of the chapter, I drew a blank. I read every word of the chapter but couldn’t call up the four major sections before you named them. I need to be even more aware of how this new approach is impacting what I understand about what I read." That is interesting! It's not possible to flip through and scan electronically in the same way that it is with paper, I mean you can sort of do it, but it's different. I do think that the modality we are reading in impacts our comprehension - just like switching to ATLAS.ti does change how we analyze data, and people are right to be wary/aware of this.
I've been wondering too if the amazing success of Collaborate (which I had been dreading!) is really because we already have had experience together offline. Research would support this notion for sure. It's why I worry about putting the whole class online. Ginny suggested doing it in a blended format -some face to face up front, with Collaborate and asynchronous online in between.